Chapter one.

Hi guys, I finally finished the first chapter on The Quintessence and I actually came up with a name for the book too. Sorry for the late chapter, like I said school hit me hard but now I am pretty much back on track.

Writing this chapter I tried to be more descriptive to make it easier to see but I am not sure if I did any better than earlier. I am hoping to get some courses on writing so I could improve faster but let us see what happens, I might be too busy to take them for a while.

Thank you for reading and I hope you can tell me how you liked the chapter or how it was written.

See you next Sunday.

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